Junior Poetry Prize
3 weeks ago
internet safety video
on Monday, November 30, 2009
This is my favorite of the internet safety videos I watched. It's very short, but communicates the idea well. I like that it's not as menacing as a lot of the other videos I watched. I felt like a lot of them were really dark and sinister and that adolescents would view them as being over the top or unrealistic and disregard what the videos were saying. This one seemed more down-to-earth and relate-able, but still clearly explained that it's dangerous to post too much online.
Personal Technology Project
My personal technology project involves mapping outlines for essays.
The objectives it relates to are:
11th grade
Objective 2
(Extended Writing): Write to analyze literary text and explain informational text. (Emphasize expository writing. Students should use the entire writing process to produce at least one extended piece per term, not necessarily limited to the type of writing emphasized at individual grade levels.)
a. Select an organizational pattern that suits the topic.
b. Provide detailed evidence and examples to substantiate arguments.
c. Support arguments with logic and text references.
In order to do this, I would first teach the students about the three main types of organization for essays (informational, persuasive and compare/contrast). We would discuss the different ways theses are written for these three different essays and different strategies for writing each type of essay. (We would write one type of each essay throughout the year.) I would initially have students think about a topic related to our class discussion that they wanted to explore more fully. I would then direct them to the following websites to explore which type of essay would best fit their topic idea. Their first assignment would be to do a rough outline of their type of essay on these websites and print them off to bring to class.
I would then put the students into partners with another students who was writing the same type of essay as they were. I would have them share their rough outlines and discuss their theses. I would then have them use MindMeister to create a detailed outline for their paper. I would tell them to have all the points from their essay map and then add quotes or facts and analysis of those facts. I would tell them to make these different things easy to recognize through the use of different fonts/colors/symbols for each different part of their outline. I would tell them to draw connections where they felt they were relevant.
This is an example. The purple nodes are quotes from the poem, and the green nodes are analysis/commentary on those quotes.
I would then have the students share their maps with their partner and see if their maps and connections made sense to their partner. After getting input from their partner, each student would begin a draft of their paper.
I think this is a useful tool for allowing students to organize their ideas and make sure they are clear BEFORE they start writing. Strong pre-writing makes the drafting process a lot easier, and this technology makes it easy map ideas, move things around, share with others and draw connections.
The objectives it relates to are:
11th grade
Objective 2
(Extended Writing): Write to analyze literary text and explain informational text. (Emphasize expository writing. Students should use the entire writing process to produce at least one extended piece per term, not necessarily limited to the type of writing emphasized at individual grade levels.)
a. Select an organizational pattern that suits the topic.
b. Provide detailed evidence and examples to substantiate arguments.
c. Support arguments with logic and text references.
In order to do this, I would first teach the students about the three main types of organization for essays (informational, persuasive and compare/contrast). We would discuss the different ways theses are written for these three different essays and different strategies for writing each type of essay. (We would write one type of each essay throughout the year.) I would initially have students think about a topic related to our class discussion that they wanted to explore more fully. I would then direct them to the following websites to explore which type of essay would best fit their topic idea. Their first assignment would be to do a rough outline of their type of essay on these websites and print them off to bring to class.
- http://www.readwritethink.org/materials/essaymap/ (informational essay)
- http://www.readwritethink.org/materials/persuasion_map/ (persuasive essay)
- http://www.readwritethink.org/materials/compcontrast/map/ (compare/contrast essay)
I would then put the students into partners with another students who was writing the same type of essay as they were. I would have them share their rough outlines and discuss their theses. I would then have them use MindMeister to create a detailed outline for their paper. I would tell them to have all the points from their essay map and then add quotes or facts and analysis of those facts. I would tell them to make these different things easy to recognize through the use of different fonts/colors/symbols for each different part of their outline. I would tell them to draw connections where they felt they were relevant.
This is an example. The purple nodes are quotes from the poem, and the green nodes are analysis/commentary on those quotes.
I would then have the students share their maps with their partner and see if their maps and connections made sense to their partner. After getting input from their partner, each student would begin a draft of their paper.
I think this is a useful tool for allowing students to organize their ideas and make sure they are clear BEFORE they start writing. Strong pre-writing makes the drafting process a lot easier, and this technology makes it easy map ideas, move things around, share with others and draw connections.
symbolism video
This video would be used in conjunction with the following UEN standards:
9th grade
Objective 3
(Comprehension of Literary Text): Comprehend literature by evaluating the contribution to meaning of several literary elements within a work of literature.
Interpret figurative language in literature (i.e., simile, metaphor, personification, hyperbole, and symbolism).
10th grade
Objective 3
(Comprehension of Literary Text): Comprehend literature by recognizing the use of literary elements across genres and cultures.
Analyze the use of simile, metaphor, pun, irony, symbolism, allusion and personification.
If I were using this in the classroom, I would have read Robert Frost's "The Road Not Taken" with them before they viewed this video so that they were somewhat familiar with it. I would then assign them to watch the video and write down their ideas about symbolism in the poem and bring them to class. Then we would discuss the symbolism they saw together, emphasizing that sometimes people see slightly different symbols in the same thing, and that's ok. Then I would give them more symbolic poetry to interpret in small groups.
teaching internet safety to an 11 year old
on Sunday, November 29, 2009
While I was home for Thanksgiving my sister was begging my mom to let her get a facebook. My mom has decided that she's too young and that it's dangerous to let her put that kind of information online. She was really put out and thought my mom was being unreasonable. So I sat her down and talked with her about the kinds of things people put online that can be dangerous. I signed on to my facebook account and started looking up some of her friends who have facebooks. I told her to try to see if she could tell from the information on their page which school her friends went to or how old they were or where they lived. We found pictures of her friends in their elementary school t-shirts and even found a girl who had posted her phone number in her status. I actually know the older brother of one friend who had way too much personal info on her page and I told him that to help her figure out how to change her privacy settings. After doing that she realized a lot more how easy it is to post personal information online and how she really isn't old enough. (Especially because facebook requires you to be 13, so she'd have to lie about her age.) She's still not very happy about it, because apparently facebook is the it thing for her group of friends right now, but she gets that my mom isn't just being strict for no reason.
internet safety
on Tuesday, November 10, 2009
The Ensign article I read gave these instructions for how to blog safely:
I think these are really important to remember, especially because blogging is such a new technology, and something we don't really know exactly how to deal with yet. We all know not to open the door to someone we don't know who looks suspicious, but there are a lot of dangers in blogging that we don't anticipate. Mentioning school or posting pictures of your house can be dangerous, especially if your blog isn't private. I think it's important that we discuss these safety issues with our students. My little sister is only 11 and wants a blog and a facebook already, but she doesn't really know what's safe to put online. I also think we need to be careful to protect our students. We shouldn't post anything about the name of the school we teach at or information or pictures of our students, especially because they are minors.
- avoid specifics
- moderate comments
- selectively post pictures
- think before you post
- be positive
- respect others' work
I think these are really important to remember, especially because blogging is such a new technology, and something we don't really know exactly how to deal with yet. We all know not to open the door to someone we don't know who looks suspicious, but there are a lot of dangers in blogging that we don't anticipate. Mentioning school or posting pictures of your house can be dangerous, especially if your blog isn't private. I think it's important that we discuss these safety issues with our students. My little sister is only 11 and wants a blog and a facebook already, but she doesn't really know what's safe to put online. I also think we need to be careful to protect our students. We shouldn't post anything about the name of the school we teach at or information or pictures of our students, especially because they are minors.
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